lesson 11: revision
Even though this lesson never says it, we are to work on revising our 'Calypso Borealis'/'Lonely as a Cloud' essays.
You should be done with writing the 5 paragraphs at this point.
Check your gradebook and see if your Unit 3 Lesson 10 assignment has been graded.
It may be that I asked you to change a few things to strengthen your essay.
If not, do not worry!!
In this lesson, you'll be coached how to revise your own essay.
This is an important skill, since when you are taking big tests like the MME, ACT or college entrance exams, you'll be tested partially on your ability to check and change your own writing.
So, get your essay out and get ready to change it for the better!!
You should be done with writing the 5 paragraphs at this point.
Check your gradebook and see if your Unit 3 Lesson 10 assignment has been graded.
It may be that I asked you to change a few things to strengthen your essay.
If not, do not worry!!
In this lesson, you'll be coached how to revise your own essay.
This is an important skill, since when you are taking big tests like the MME, ACT or college entrance exams, you'll be tested partially on your ability to check and change your own writing.
So, get your essay out and get ready to change it for the better!!
revise
Use the checklist on slide 3 of the lesson to guide you through revising your own essay.
You should be changing what you wrote here and there to make it better--easier to read and follow.
Save the changes you've made.
You should be changing what you wrote here and there to make it better--easier to read and follow.
Save the changes you've made.
assessment: portfolio
On slide 5 of the lesson, you are given the Revision Workshop worksheet.
PLEASE DO NOT FILL IT OUT.
Instead, please upload your revised essay into the dropbox for this lesson.
Good job!!
One more lesson with the essay, and then we are done!
PLEASE DO NOT FILL IT OUT.
Instead, please upload your revised essay into the dropbox for this lesson.
Good job!!
One more lesson with the essay, and then we are done!
YOU DO NOT HAVE PERMISSION TO VIEW DROPPED Assessments
If you see this message on your dropbox page, don't panic! It means that you are not required to do the assignment and the teacher closed the dropbox.
Move on to the next lesson!
There are only 2 more lessons before the collaboration project is due and the semester exam is opened!!
Move on to the next lesson!
There are only 2 more lessons before the collaboration project is due and the semester exam is opened!!